To: m.peace@mann.com
From: candeladurotortosa@gmail.com
Subject: Lunch
Dear Michael. I write you and email to tell you that we are going to organise a business lunch to celebrate Lucy's birthday. She asked me to let you know that i need your confirmation soon to search vegetarian restaurants for you. But i can tell you that the lunch is on 26th October. The hour didn't know it yet. I hope you can come.
Kind regards
Candela
Comentarios
Dear Michael. / Dear Michael, with coma
I write you and email... / to put in other line, below Dear Michael
i need... / I need with capital letter 1ª person
confirmation soon/soon confirmation adjective in front of the noun
i can... / I can with capital letter 1ª person
The hour didn't know it.../ it's ok, but maybe I would write it in present: don't know it...